These are two drafts of my contents page. I got my peer to asses my work so I could improve my work, he said:
"The background is very plain on the first draft and the pictures at the bottom are stretched. Although the big main picture is well edited it has no relevance to the contents page. Both of the mastheads are very basic and could be improved by following more conventions."
"The second draft is a little bit better as the background is not as plain but the pictures and font again are not very good and do not link in with both the genre and conventions."
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