"The first two drafts are very basic and lack detail/information, I do not like the star on the first one as a kicker and the picture that is being used as the main picture are not well enough edited and could be better."
"The third draft was much better as there is more detail and the picture is more simple and fits in better. The font the subtitles are in though does not go with the genre and does not follow any conventions shown in existing magazines. The banner/picure are also very basic."
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