Ryan Scragg AS Media Foundation Portfolio
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Monday, 9 December 2013
Draft double page spread
This is my draft for my double page spread, i asked one of my peers to assess this so I can improve my work, he said:
"I like the overall plan and layout of the spread as it follows alot of conventions shown in the very popular rolling stones magazines. The only thing you could improve on is by linking the two pages with the large J and/or adding a caption on the main picture linking to the text and adding page numbers to link with contents page and front cover."
"I like the overall plan and layout of the spread as it follows alot of conventions shown in the very popular rolling stones magazines. The only thing you could improve on is by linking the two pages with the large J and/or adding a caption on the main picture linking to the text and adding page numbers to link with contents page and front cover."
Wednesday, 4 December 2013
Draft contents page
These are two drafts of my contents page. I got my peer to asses my work so I could improve my work, he said:
"The background is very plain on the first draft and the pictures at the bottom are stretched. Although the big main picture is well edited it has no relevance to the contents page. Both of the mastheads are very basic and could be improved by following more conventions."
"The second draft is a little bit better as the background is not as plain but the pictures and font again are not very good and do not link in with both the genre and conventions."
"The background is very plain on the first draft and the pictures at the bottom are stretched. Although the big main picture is well edited it has no relevance to the contents page. Both of the mastheads are very basic and could be improved by following more conventions."
"The second draft is a little bit better as the background is not as plain but the pictures and font again are not very good and do not link in with both the genre and conventions."
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